I am excited to share
with you the results from this year’s Spring Writing Competition! I
enjoyed reading every entry. There were some I went back to read several times
just because I loved them so much! The hardest part about judging a
writing competition is that you have to rate the entries. I HATE this
part. Each entry was unique, well written, and SO different from the
others. But, for the sake of the contest, here are the winners from 3rd to 1st:
Medicine by J. Todd Cumming
My favorite passage
from his entry:
“My name is Linda
Worthington, and I’m with the Bureau of Medicine and Hospitals. You may be
happy to know that, after reviewing his records and judging his needs, we have
approved his request for emergency surgery.”
"We’ve approved his
request for emergency surgery to reattach both his arms. That was the
application to the Bureau of Medicine and Hospitals was for, after all.”
"I can’t believe I’m hearing this.”
"Well, Mrs. Woodhouse, we are here to help. It’s good that you filled out the Form 1124-B as well, explaining why Mr. Woodhouse was incapable of filling out the Form 12A, Request for Immediate Surgery. I’m not entirely sure if it allows me to communicate with you in regards to this matter. We do need to preserve Mr. Woodhouse’s right to privacy, after all. However, as Form 1124-B authorized you to request the surgery in the first place, I suppose I can tell you what I can.”
“Miss Worthington, I have
no idea what kind of sick joke you think you’re playing. My husband died three
weeks ago on the floor of that hospital, waiting for approval to begin
“Again, my condolences
on your loss. We did treat the request with as much expediency as the situation
2) Fleeing the Praxis with Cameron by Collin Simonsen
My favorite passage
from his entry:
“Don’t call me that.”
“Do you have any secrets that you don’t tell anyone?” Leslie said.
“Well, not many people know I have a pet rooster named Lucky.”
“Where is he?”
Cameron pointed to the stricken ship, as a small explosion shook it. They laughed.
“I don’t think Lucky is the right name for him.”
“Maybe if he survives I’ll change his name to Very Lucky. What about you, Leslie? Any secrets?”
Leslie looked at her feet. The pod began to shake a little bit.
“We’re entering the atmosphere.” Cameron said.
“I’m not completely human.”
“Huh? What do you mean?”
Leslie raised her index finger, and then, using her other hand, uncapped it, revealing a USB drive.
“This is how I saved the Praxis…”
1) The King’s Treasury by Miriam Seegmiller Leman
I was in love with this entry. Written for children, it is a uniquely
creative twist on the old nursery rhyme “Sing a Song of Six Pence”. One of my favorite passages:
“…King Thomas determined to reduce spending at the palace.
He closed half of the palace and dismissed thirty servants. He
ordered half of the royal gardens replanted in grass and sent away thirty
gardeners. Then he marched to the palace kitchens to command the chef to
prepare less costly meals. Queen Valerie was already there.
“Bake an enormous pie made from two dozen pheasants for the next
feast,” she commanded the chef.
“Darling,” the King interrupted, “pheasants are costly. Couldn’t
you serve chicken? And why serve honey at every feast? Honey costs
more than pearls these days.”
The Queen gave a carefree laugh and waltzed out.
The chief plowman rushed in.
“King Thomas, an enormous flock of thrushes is eating your
The King groaned. If he lost his crops he would be ruined!
"Summon the best huntsmen to protect my fields day and night!” Then he had a marvelous idea. “Have the thrushes they kill brought to the royal kitchens.” The king rubbed his hands together with a grin. Thrushes were free, pheasants were not! They would secretly exchange thrushes for pheasants in the Queen’s enormous pie.
The Queen’s feast was a grand success. Hungry guests
savored the delectable dishes, especially the pie.
“What fine meat pie! It must have peacock or some equally
King Thomas smiled as he ate. The thrushes tasted just
like chicken. The chirping of thrushes in his fields entered through the
windows and he almost chortled to think that dowdy, black birds now crossed the
palates of nobles.”
Thank you to all those who entered this spring’s competition! I look forward to hosting more writing contests later this summer and fall. I hope all who entered found their feedback helpful. Always remember that writing is a journey. Once a piece is completed, it is set aside, and we prepare to start the journey anew. Enjoy each moment of the journey! (Winners, please check your e-mails for codes to your free editing packages.)
Editor of Mystic Manuscripts
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